miércoles, 1 de mayo de 2013








My city

Santiago is the capital of Chile, mi country!! J  For me, the more big problem of this city is it great growth of population, that is the mean cause from  decline of the quality of life of the population because there aren´t sufficient infrastructure and there are very few leeway in surface as to increase it, main in the center place as the center of Santiago (the Commune complete!), the best example or argument for back (support) this affirmation is in the cause of transport public, the Metro, the more old stations (red and yellow lines), for this, each time more is most difficult and disagree to live here, the planning don´t was think to long period, and is for this, that by me is a great challenge to create a one solution in this topic, the topic Strategic Urban Planning.
In this sense, one plan very interesting or “the present effort, in this sense...” is the “Plan maestro de transporte Santiago 2015” by MOP and MTT, that in a promising future, 12 years the car park will be of 2.7 million and 300 thousand of cars approximately, is the say, more the double of the actual park, also, the growth of the number of inhabitants of the capital (of 6 millions 600 thousands to 7 millions 300 thousands inhabitants). This Plan has between its projects more big, the creation of the “Linea 7 del Metro” that will join Maipú with Vitacura in one “straight line” in consequence most quick, this alternative line is very great for me (I am from Maipú).
Other of the important projects, will be the incorporate of the urban train at the public transport, for example, the train: Airport Pudahuel – Renca - Baquedano station, also the expand and improvement of the actual road network… but this Plan, Are will be the that really going to need Santiago? Will be sufficient?
  






Vocabulary:
Leeway: margen

1 comentario:

  1. Stefano;

    Word count: 315, fine.

    Your intention to write is OK, but you have many things to correct in your text. You neeed to check these, please;

    Chile,( mi) country!!
    For me, (the more big problem) of this city
    is( it) great growth of population,
    the (mean) cause (from decline) of the... because (there aren´t) sufficient infrastructure...
    there are very (few) leeway
    ...( main) in the ( center) place as the center of Santiago ´(the Commune complete!)`,
    the best example or argument (for) back this affirmation is...
    ... in the ( cause) of ( transport public), the Metro, the (more old) stations (and disagree to live here)...
    the planning (don´t was think ) to long period...
    ...create a (one) solution in this topic,
    ( the topic Strategic Urban Planning).
    ...(one plan very interesting) ,( is the say),
    ... more (the double)
    ... (of 6 (millions) to 7( millions) 300 thousands inhabitants).

    ...between (its projects more big),
    ... in consequence (most quick),
    (Other) of the important projects,
    ... also the (expand) and improvement
    ...(Are will be the that really going to need Santiago? Will be sufficient?)...

    Please, check.

    Regards,

    JC

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